(For the record: Yes. I can absolutely do a better job than this. I am 100% sure. You want to hire me? I will work for whatever HALF of what this person made to make the video is... I have never made a video before but I'm sure that I could fart out a concept* better than this in about 30 minutes.)
It's not a good sign when I watch your video and the first thing I think of is this:
*Plus storyboard, plus make a delicious sandwich, plus perform a proper pour of Guinness.
